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Rape Stories that will rock your world and blow your mind!Thu, 29 Jul 2010 18:12:25 +0000http://wordpress.org/?v=2.2.2By: Jon Maddux
http://rape--stories.com/2009/04/09/what-harm-can-a-package-cause/#comment-832
Jon MadduxSun, 12 Apr 2009 04:59:48 +0000http://rape--stories.com/2009/04/09/what-harm-can-a-package-cause/#comment-832I am not one to typically comment on a story based on syntax but in this case the spelling errors detracted so much from the fluid reading of the story it was hard to really get into it.
If you rewrite it and use entire words instead of highschool texting syntax, ie. please instead of PLZ, and the correct words, ie. using "no" when you are intending to use "know" the story would be a pretty good read.
JonI am not one to typically comment on a story based on syntax but in this case the spelling errors detracted so much from the fluid reading of the story it was hard to really get into it.
If you rewrite it and use entire words instead of highschool texting syntax, ie. please instead of PLZ, and the correct words, ie. using “no” when you are intending to use “know” the story would be a pretty good read.